Wednesday, November 7, 2012

"Unto Dawn" and "Moving Forward"


My collection of short stories and poetry tend to be dark and depressing, because that was what I was feeling when I wrote them. In the case of these two poems, I was attempting to write something more positive. I still see them as coming from a dark place, but with a sense of optimism.

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"Unto Dawn"

I have worn out negativity's demand;
I'm beginning to see scars
                    that are not by my hand.

by MFW III

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"Moving Forward"

Behind the wheel
I drive alone to notes, percussion, and soft and screaming vocals.
Soothed by the sounds of harmony and chaos and the gray clouds above.
I make my way, some way, somewhere, and I don't care,
As long as there is no rush but the rush of the moment.

Following dotted lines
I am kept on track, but free to cross over when no one is watching.
And no one is watching, no one is watching, no one is watching.
I lose this odd feeling of bliss when the sun sends a kiss,
A reminder that He is watching, He is watching with love.

Facing the sun
I follow these lines with lyrics flowing and music sounding.
Discovery presents as clouds part and the sky burns orange.
I discover a new sense of bliss provided by a saving grace,
And continue on my way, away, with the rush of the moment.

by MFW III

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